Assignmetn #4

`My final paper looks a little different than my first draft because i added 
a little more details and changed the fonts and all that.
When I and my classmates were assigned in three groups for peer reviewing 
they told me to change a little bit. So basically I did like they told me
and made some changes and also I changed the run on sentence etc. 




`My classmate told me that I have a good start and I had a nice ending, which
made me happy because I wasnt happy with the piece of writing I had after
listening to my classmates I was happy because it shows that how I felt 
about writing.




`yes, after revising my essay I came up with a lot of mistake, and I also 
learned that I had some run ons and fragments which I did the changes 
after peer reviewing.




`My revisions was that it helps when we peer review each others paper 
because it helps us alot. For insistence, the writer doesnt know
if they made mistake so the person who is peer reviewing it makes
a lot of changes and tell us where we need to shorten the paragraphs 
or cut off some sentence. When we write our own essay its unnoticeble for 
us to know we made any mistakes and also we know what our essay going
to be about and know our tone.




`The strongest aspect of my essay was that how I compare myself with cooking
and writing. How cooking was like writing to me and how it changed it changed 
me to become better writer.
And the weakest would be that compareing something and also adding coma or 
cutting off run ons.