Assignment #7

~Well I feel like im making some progress I say that because I used have comma lace, fragments and run-on in my sentence, but now I no longer have that error. I have tried so many other writing skills just to improve my writing for my essay's and help me out through out the semester. The problem that I have is writing up to 3 to 4 pages I mean anyone can write up to 2 or half pages but no longer than that. ~The thing that I like about this class is when we peer review each others paper, I find that really helpful, when we did it at first it really helped me improved my essay another good thing about it was that we made three copies and read it out loud to each other. That's one thing that I really love about my class.
~One thing that I want to change about my class would be less pages in essay's and we should have more time to peer review our papers.
~ When it comes to writing I wait for last min I always do my essays at the night its due. I really need to change this habit of mine because I know its not going to help  when I have less time I'll write less and that's not helpful.

Assignment #6

The rhetorical situation of  my literacy narrative would be about mac makeup how useful it can be. The ad is describing Mac is expensive than other brand of makeups.  Moreover the audience for my literacy narrative is almost  for anyone well only the women and any age. The purpose of the literacy narrative is to show people how MAC can be used in so many different ways and it keeps your skin soft and clean. I myself use mac, it really doesn't damage my skin whatsoever. I describe it by saying how hard it was for me to find an ad and talk about it but, after talking to my friend it helped me what to write about and how to start off the ad. Finally, the tone for both essays are very different and hard to start of your writing. 

Assignment # 5

~Purpose-The purpose of this ad is to show people how  MAC makeup can be for anyone and how useful it is. There are lots of makeup different kinds and from different companies but I recommend "MAC"  . makeup covers up all of of things such as scars, buries anything that you have on your face and you want to cover it up. 

~Audience- The target audience for this ad is the people who likes MAC makeup. They are targeting people who think other companies of makeup is not good as MAC and really want them to try MAC.

~Genre-I learned that MAC can be used for any type of skin there is no need to worry about getting skin damaged or other things. Basically I myself use MAC for my skin and it remind me of others who want to try something more useful for their skin. I don't have much INFO because I know that there shouldn't be a lot of words on ads because people don't have much time to read it and if its very long they will get bored and stop reading the ad. 

~Tone- The tone for this ad is for everyone and to show others that using mac makeup is very good and harmfulness  and keeps your skin in a very good condition. 

Assignmetn #4

`My final paper looks a little different than my first draft because i added 
a little more details and changed the fonts and all that.
When I and my classmates were assigned in three groups for peer reviewing 
they told me to change a little bit. So basically I did like they told me
and made some changes and also I changed the run on sentence etc. 




`My classmate told me that I have a good start and I had a nice ending, which
made me happy because I wasnt happy with the piece of writing I had after
listening to my classmates I was happy because it shows that how I felt 
about writing.




`yes, after revising my essay I came up with a lot of mistake, and I also 
learned that I had some run ons and fragments which I did the changes 
after peer reviewing.




`My revisions was that it helps when we peer review each others paper 
because it helps us alot. For insistence, the writer doesnt know
if they made mistake so the person who is peer reviewing it makes
a lot of changes and tell us where we need to shorten the paragraphs 
or cut off some sentence. When we write our own essay its unnoticeble for 
us to know we made any mistakes and also we know what our essay going
to be about and know our tone.




`The strongest aspect of my essay was that how I compare myself with cooking
and writing. How cooking was like writing to me and how it changed it changed 
me to become better writer.
And the weakest would be that compareing something and also adding coma or 
cutting off run ons.