Saturday, March 31, 2012

Assignment #10

Well, since this is a free essay I'm going to write about my high school year. During my high school year I really had fun with my friends, classmate and teachers. High school is something totally different it gives you a lot of memories to hold for ever and its the best part of our life. When I was in high school I went Thur the good and bad times. At first I thought high school was scary because people used to say that high school student will put student in trashcans and sell drugs or smoke, but when I was in high school I didn't see such a thing everyone was so nice and sweet. I didn't get to see people selling drugs or smoke. And when I was in high school I was with nice and smart people there was a good and bad group it all depends on you who you want to be with, and I choose the good group and was in honor classes and got all A and B grades. I had some friends who were not good they used to smoke and always come late to class. I used to tell them that its not a good idea to smoke in a such young age. Instead of smoking drink something good and go to your classes and make your parents be proud of you. Lastly, when it was my last year in high school I had so much fun, made the best year of my life. Had so much fun with my friends we cried because we knew that after high school we wont be able to see each other as often we did when we were in high school. After my exams and final grades I started to have more fun with my other friends who were going to stay we did a lot of fun stuff such as pranking other students and taking picture where ever we went. So basically that's all I did with my friends and made my last year memorable

Assignment #11


  1. I tend to struggle most with question mark. Sometimes I usually get  confused whether I should or should not use a question mark.  This error always cause me problem with  my writing because it is I'm not sure of it and if someone reads my writing they might think something about me. So basically I want to prevent this problem from happening in the future;I will to be more careful and use examples to not make the mistake again.
  2.  Another problem that I struggle a lot with is putting my thoughts together while writing an essay. I really need to work on this, its causing me a lot of trouble. I'm sure that this might effect my writing because each time I write an essay I get lower grade. I will work on my essay and put my thoughts before hand so I don't have to worry about getting lower grade and explain more and more.
  3. Lastly, the other error that I'm facing would be my words. I need to improve my vocabulary's and use strong words and make my essay more like an college essay. This will effect my writing because using words that is not a college level can be effective for my essays and it wont show that I'm a college student.I can improve this problem by using dictionary's more often and Internet to get better with my vocabs so I can use strong words on my next essay.

Friday, March 9, 2012

Assignment #9

What is true meaning of friendship? Well the true meaning of friendship is great relationship in the world than any other relations. Also we can share all things to our friends but not with our parents or someone else. A true friend is that when your sick he or she will always be there for you no matter what and share your pain,sorrow and moreover your happiness.Friendship is a feeling of comfort and emotional safety with a person. A unique blend of affection, loyalty, love, respect, trust and loads of fun is perhaps what describes the true meaning of a friendship. Similar interests, mutual respect and strong attachment with each other. A true friend is when he or she comes in the middle of night to wish you happy birthday and when your sad she will always be standing next to you. And there will be always a shoulder to lean on and know everything about you but still like you. And true friends wont let you do stupid things they will be beside you. A true friend doesn't care if your black, white, Asian, Mexican and lastly don't care if your fat or skinny.

Friday, March 2, 2012

Assignment #8

Well, after looking at both topics I wanted to talk about Free speech off campus must be protected by Frank D. LoMonte.
This topic is about how the laws are being made on students to be aware of what they say or what they put up in their daily life sites such as my-space, Facebook and many more. Frank used many examples from others experiences to people to be careful and watch out on what they put on their Facebook and other sites that they use the most. He also mentioned that a student from University of Minnesota had gone to court because she wrote that how her and her friends gave their cadaver a nickname and about stabbing someone with knife. Moreover, many people say that person could have been her ex-boyfriend and one of her classmate read those messaged and than forwarded them to the University of Minnesota authorities. Even though Tatro had no intention of hurting anyone, she was charged and disciplined. Well to me people can say anything they want to because its a freedom of speech no one can say anything to someone like Tatro posted something on her friends wall. And I picked this topic because everyone jokes around and say something but that doesn't mean that they have intention of doing something. I think students should not be charged for writing something on their friends wall like I mentioned on my previous people joke around they say funny things and call each other names that doesn't mean anything bad, but I guess now people should be more careful on what they say and to whom they say it.